Monday 8 April 2019
If I had Wings Poem
For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about if I had wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with the poem. Last of all we had to write our own if I had wings poem. We had to use sticky ( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.
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Hi Hamish. I enjoyed reading your poem with you. We realised as we read that you had forgotten to use the senses so it was good to see that you could go back and add these in. You had some interesting language like, 'If I had wings I would slowly glide over the silent sea.' This gave me a lovely picture in my head. Your next step is to make sure you follow the success criteria from the beginning and think about using more adjectives.
ReplyDeleteHi Hamish, what an interesting poem. Poems are very fun things to read and write and I hope you write more of them.
ReplyDeleteI would love to have wings too. I enjoyed your variation of things to do if you had wings. It's good to see you ended up using your wings for good and stopping loads of criminals.
Keep up the great work. Love Mum.