WALTdevelop our own poem in response to a model ( packing my bag for.... by
James Norcliffe)
James Norcliffe)
Walt use an increasingly descriptive vocabulary to add intrest to our writing.
Walt have some fun and be creative with ideas and imagination.
One Creepy gas mask so I don’t breath in deadly radiation dauntly staring
at everything hoping to lessen it’s courage.
I will need one big white radiation suit with triple layers equipped
with an extra big black gas mask
I will need 4 sample glasses so I can get radiation as well as do tests
on
on
myself
Incase I get radiation.
One reasonably big yellow geiger counter to detect where the
BIGGEST radiation spikes are.
I will need one sharp bladed machete to defend myself in case
Any big green pulsating mutants attack.
And I will need one big light brown rope
To help me climb up buildings and
hills/mountains.
And lastly I will need one guide to ensure
that I don't painfully perish.
By Flynn and Hamish
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